martes, septiembre 20, 2011

Breviarios de autobús (tercetos asonantes)

Otro para Laura

Me gusta la brisa que trajo el otoño,
el dulce tambor de tus pasos que alertan
de tu cuerpo que está doblando el recodo.

Me gustan las mantas que sueñan que duermes,
que rompen con todo si tú te desvelas,
me gusta el puchero que gana si pierdes.

Me gusta robarte de noche el vestido,
perderme en tu abrazo, probarme tu nombre,
me gustan los días que pasan contigo.

18 comentarios:

Jorge Encinas Martínez dijo...

¡Uff! Me gusta tu poema, entero y verdadero. Pero tienes frases de las de enmarcar o inscribir en piedra, como "las mantas que sueñan que duermes" o lo de "probarme tu nombre".

Un abrazo

(Gracias, gracias y gracias por tu comentario en mi blog: me emocionó)

Altran dijo...

Gracias a ti por seguir paseándote por estos lares. Leerte es siempre un placer!!

Un abrazo!

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Creo que Laura quiere otro poema...

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